On the Threshold: a Fifty-word Story

Using a piece of chalk, the girl drew a door on the pavement.

She’d seen it in a cartoon. The door was a portal to another world. It made sense to a child.

She knocked on the stone. “Anyone there?”

A hand snaked out and dragged her down to Hell.

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10 responses to “On the Threshold: a Fifty-word Story

  1. agnieszkacoutinho

    Whyyyy? Why to hell??..:/ Im sorry but I dont like the end ..lol

  2. sharonledwith

    Poor girl. Too bad it wasn’t a time portal. Could have ended differently! Wink.

  3. Reblogged this on Jane Dougherty Writes and commented:
    There are quite a few kids I know who deserve this…

  4. Love it, Carol! Deadpan and hopefully deserved 🙂

  5. Brilliant! I’m so impressed – I’m struggling to write a story of fewer than 100 words, and you’ve nailed it in fifty 🙂

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